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There is something
That catches me
Each & every time.
i looked at these waves at marine drive
as they fouled landscape
they sunk into itself,
Since,
i don’t work with her ,
i don’t sit at the Irani hotel to have a dinner with her.
but i can see thick skinned band on her wrist.
The bus was taking me,
Over the bridge & I looked on into the tunnel.
at far end at Nariman house
and then went to Zaveri bazaar...
Hoping
to see her again,
she sat on the willow bank
watching the duke of clervaux...
she cried a lot.
I hugged her
explained the game
and she was sorry
she had torn herself
from the mud bowl
and had hurried so joyfully
she lean over slightly
holds nothing
hurried to the yellow gate
to get FREE from her grief
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Wow!!
ReplyDeleteThis is so different and beautiful :)..
Enjoyed your post :)
Best Of Luck For the Contest :)..
thx simran fr u sweet comment
ReplyDeleteReally nicely written, wonderful words strung together to form such a lovely
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wonderful !
ReplyDeletevery nice :)
keep writing & smiling
all the best
im nt sure i completely understood it :(((((
ReplyDeleteFelt like words are weaved not written, beautiful...
ReplyDeleteLovely pictures and lovely words. It had an ethreal feel to it. But I must agree with Sadiya that I really did not undertand what it was all about. But is it always necessary to undertand to enjoy something? Best of luck for Blog-a-ton. You can find my entry here In search of freedom
ReplyDeleteWonderful writing...enjoyed it...
ReplyDeleteHere is my entry...
आजाद है हम
A unique take on the take.. Good luck for Blog-a-Ton.. Free... Are we?
ReplyDeleteSomeone is Special
A bit above my head, frankly... but I liked the visuals and the lyrics a lot!
ReplyDeleteATB for BAT
Do check out my entry at Free? To do what exactly?
Regards
Wandering Thoughts
i enjoyed the flow of words too...but frankly i didn't get it fully too ..........who is that she and what she did finally to relieve her of her grieve
ReplyDeleteThe context eluded me and thus, could not decipher much beyond the pain and the joy upon the eventual release from it.
ReplyDeleteBut enjoyed your choice of words and brevity of your expression.
Well I can interpret it .. but have I understood it? Doubts and doubts :-)
ReplyDeleteA short and beautiful take on the topic...the pictures, choice of words and the total effect are superb. Enjoyed reading it.
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ReplyDelete@Cherry Blossom, Ketan ,Brijender Singh,Aashish Sood ,Someone is Special ,saru,Hema,Saru Singhal ,sowmya,jim,simran and SADiya n Fool, the critics & aativas... ...thx all & ...WELCOME TO MY BLOG.....
ReplyDeleteI think the very first image is very captivating. I can relate well to what i've just read because often we know exactly what we're saying and say it the way we envision it since in our mind the picture is complete but to a new reader it might not seem the same.
ReplyDeleteTherefore although I don't fully comprehend the thoughts/emotions that must have accompanied this writing but I applaud your confidence in writing exactly what you want to without worrying about the rest.